|Reviews for The Girl is Mine|
| Ringo City's Various Stories 5/6/13 . chapter 13
Reminds me of Fifty shades of Grey trilogy :D
| galgalatz 5/4/13 . chapter 15
Lol ! this really sounds like a disaster waiting to happen, although I'd personally like it to turn out well.
| Ringo City's Various Stories 5/6/13 . chapter 3
Really good, I like the description and the protection, awesome :D
| Silver 5/3/13 . chapter 15
The new chapters are getting better and better! WHEN ARE ZANE AND HER GOING TO DATE? :P 3 This is an amazing story. Please update soon! But don't rush it! I'd rather read a good story that took ages to write than a bad story that was written in a day. Lots of love. Update soon!
Thanks for sharing.
| IGoMoo 5/3/13 . chapter 15
Idk, I feel like this whole thing is forgetting what the plot is. The bet is kinda forgotten and the stalker issue seems to not be there. Its more like a love story just happening and just told so little stuff to play on. Maybe really get into the the whole bet thing and the stalker. Maybe then it will feel like the story isn't dragging its feet
| The13StarsOfAlaska 5/4/13 . chapter 15
Awesome chapter, update soon! Oooh, imagine if Melissa liked Zane. That would be hilarious!
| Justareaderfan 5/3/13 . chapter 15
I foresee a skanky girl flirting with Zane the whole time, a very angry Milla and a heartbroken Adrian.
Loved the ferris wheel part :)
| beverlyamethyst16 5/3/13 . chapter 15
Amazing chapter! I hope this three way date isn't a disaster at least for Zane and her ;) Zane has started to annoy me again. Ok I love him but seriously, he half ignores her and then throws her liking him back in her face. At least he tried to comfort her on the ferris wheel... haha please update soon ;D
| Hayit'Serenity 5/3/13 . chapter 15
Hay you updated! I thought it would be a long time Haha. Update soon please I wanna read about this shopping trip and I wanna read some Mils and Zane :D Hayit'sSerenity
| The-Darkest-Blue 5/3/13 . chapter 15
Lol! Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| dwarfperson 4/23/13 . chapter 14
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?! ARGHHHH I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I literally can't stop thinking about this story, it's just so good! *sigh* why can't I write stuff as good as this? You're an awesome writer! Please update! DWARF
| eylandria13 4/23/13 . chapter 5
An interesting idea, I sense that Zane is going to get the girl but I sort am developing an attachment to Jaden. You write very well too so be sure to finish the story.
| Karissa04 4/19/13 . chapter 14
Like this chapter a lot. It was incredibly interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hurry up and post it. :)
| Hayit'Serenity 4/21/13 . chapter 14
Zane is a very confusing character! I really really love this story (?) Update soon! Hayit'sserenity
| charlie 4/19/13 . chapter 14
Thnq thnq thnq soooo much fr updating fast. I ws damn happy n bouncing in d air. Woooow Jane is showing he is nt emotionally challenged nymore,hehehe..,He is showing his cute side n I love it pls keep on writin one heck of a gr8 writer hehehe u jst keep me hanging there fr more thnx again n write more..:)