I absolutely love this story! (and you) Jill is a refreshing story. She is not childish just childlike. She is in no hurry to grow up, keeps in root to the morals that cartoons and parents taught her. She is one of those people that stand out, she's unique from all the other girls that are in such a rush to have sex and be 'mature' (like Carlee) they don't seem ton understand her so she's deemed as "annoying" she is humorous and awkward, she's loveable. Unlike a lot of the female characters in stories with similar plots (an unpopular girl gets the popular boy), Jill obtains qualities that makes I obvious to me (and other readers) why Kent fell for her. Other main girl protagonists are insecure, trying to be older, attempts to be like the other girls, goes through makeovers to be more glamorous, and so on. Kent is a dear, he isn't mushy but loves Jill just how she is. He is the one trying to get closer to her, going to her house, going on errands with her, putting her hand in his, etc.

This is so awesome. I love how your plot just goes so smoothly it makes everything so WONDERFUL

KEEP WRITING

Great story. Write more of these please?

Oh, God! Such a beautiful story! :) love it! Kent!
Regards,
Diane.

Wow. I really really enjoyed your story. Jill and Kent are so lovely together. I also really found Jill's parents super endearing, haha. Can't wait to read more of your work!

Ps. I have a huge thing for flower-boys... lol.

Damn this was long. But so worth it. Been in need of a really good story lately and this definitely delivered. Seriously loved your story and way of writing! Thank you for helping me procrastinate when I should have been studying :P

i love this story... refreshingly modern. I am so absorbed with the characters of the story and I admire the embellishments... i hope to read more from Ms Haps

This is great!

I can't stop re-reading this.
It. Is. So. Freaking. Adorable.
Ahh! *squeeaaaaall*

Easily one of my favorites! Well done!

Jill is adorable!

That is all.

Seriously though, I loved this oneshot - I think that it is easily the best one I have ever read :)

Super sweet, made me "awww".
Love from, some Random

THAT WAS SO FRIGGIN ADORABLE.

I hate Carlee, but this was so cute.

This is SO CUUUUUTE! *massive squeeee* I love it! It's laugh-out-loud hilarious and sweet and adorable and so satisfyingly fluffy and romantic. *sighs happily* It's perfect. Kent and Jill are just so cute together - as awkward long-time acquaintances, to best friends, to the most adorable couple EVER. Gah, I am helplessly fangirling, but I can't help it, this is one of my favourite oneshots on fictionpress, and I have read a LOT. :P Thank you for writing something so fun and enjoyable! :D

So friggin cute!