|Reviews for Shattered Terra: Axis of Darkness|
| 117Jorn 3/4/12 . chapter 8
Another good chapter! Look forward for the next!
| 117Jorn 2/14/12 . chapter 7
Hmm, I'm not gonna say its bad. It shows potential, but I think adding some non Yuri pairings into the fic, and maybe making some of the chapters a bit longer would make it a bit better.
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