|Reviews for Whirling to Focus|
| back2reality 2/21/12 . chapter 1
Nice job. Makes you wish you had a partner to bring you back from the brink of madness!
| Honorcpt 1/25/12 . chapter 1
I like it
| askingalexandria908 1/25/12 . chapter 1
Wow! It definitely expresses how many people feel, like they go insane without anothers touch, they need someone else to bring them back down. When you're so stressed, sometimes you feel like you're in a whirlwind or like you're going insane, this DEFINITELY expresses it and I can see how the person is feeling and it expresses things in a manner that is also entertaining for a person to read about. Good job and keep writing!