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SiahXSiren 3/26/12 . chapter 1I really like this poem |
True Talker 1/25/12 . chapter 1If this is the one that I love - yes I do LOVE YOU it isn't all about lust - Can you please work with me here? I see stuff of coruption so I tell you that You won't corupt me that I LOVE you and I trust you - hello I trust you because I love you it has nothing to do with lust. Then I tell you that I trust you because I love you and then you tell me it is all about lust. I NEVER said that it was about lust, ever not ever... I NEVER said that you would corrupt me never, not ever... It isn't about lust, and it isn't about corruption I HONESTLY do LOVE YOU - SERIOUSLY - heck I DON'T trust people touching me - I wrote those things because I LOVE YOU WORK with me here I am SOOO TRYING - Truth we haven't met yet and we NEED to talk you know in person - we need to learn how to be around eachother. We need to learn to spend time together to see what that is like. This is the reason why I find it difficult to be on here - this site because I see all this negativity and I try and I try and I say the wrong things and or I say what I feel so that you aren't burdened and then you take it wrong and it isn't meant negatively or wrong at all what so ever SERIOUSLY it is not. Don't you dare tell me that it is only lust and not love (as she begins to cry) when all of the messages speak of love and what my heart feels is love. SO DON'T you dare tell me that it is just lust. DOn't you dare. |
William Steele 1/25/12 . chapter 1Well, mademoiselle. I definitely respect your writing skill. I like this poem as best one may like a poem with pain. You have a good piece here and I hope to see more in the future. |