Another beautiful piece. Just out of curiosity what was one of the languages you used. I recognized the French and German but what about the other? Also I like the performance you had your characters preform. Good job.

I think that was, by far, my favorite! I love all the actors, their lines are fantastic... awesome! :3

it has such beautiful imagery, I'd have loved to have attended that show. :)

This poem GREAT! :D Really fun to read... and it's a little bit creepy! That's always good!

Update when you can. This rocks!

I cannot wait for your next update. I want to find out if Oliver's captive gets any closer to escape. Although I seriously doubt that.

Oliver is terrifying and I love it. I feel I should read your poem about Zombie Dolly.

The plot thickens. I am intrigued. I love how you described the ballerina. I can't wait to find out who the red-head is. A toy clown perhaps. Also, and I hope you take this as a compliment, your writing style reminds me of Lewis Carrol's Alice in Wonderland and Through the Looking Glass.

This is so awesome and also a little creepy, which to be honest makes me enjoy the poem even more. Just out of curiosity though did you mean to spell stare like that on the fourth line for rhyming purposes?

Well written, and full of suspense.

It's good to see you're back.

Cool! I like the rymes and the mystery added to it with suspense!

I love this story sooooo much! :D

So creepy, so well written, and so AWESOME! XD

This toy box is more exiting then mine ever was.

Well done. :)

This. Is. Amazing.

This is adventure, amazing poetry,angst, and romance all put into one! You are an AMAZING poet! -

This is written quite well and it is quite creative.

I love the last few line, I wish to leave/Oh no you must stay/Then he puts out his hand/Please come this way.

It's kinda scary and cool in a creepy way.

And the ballerina lady, part was oh so amazing.

Love to see more. :)