|Reviews for A Horror story|
| logan89 2/6/12 . chapter 1
Devon turning into a demon and attacking the mean teacher, your descriptions of the attack were very nice. Then attacking other students, the sheer fear your characters felt from seeing the attacks and the lights going out comes out of your writing. Then your mysterious ending of finding no bodies, good touch. I enjoyed reading this, just 1 quick comment, there are a few spelling errors, otherwise very good presentation of your story. Please keep writing.