This is really good! You need to write more! Now i am at a cliff hanger and i really want to know what happeneds.:)

I really like it! This seems like it has a really fun and adventurous story line. Its really well written too! Keep up the good work!

They are so cute and both VERY stubborn. I love it when you post new chapters... Keep them coming!

Yay! I am soooooooo glad you are continuing this story! You don't know how long I've been itching for the conclusion to this piece. I personally love the concept, as it is not a common one. It is rare and well written and that is what I LOVE about this piece. Can't wait for more! Again, thank you for keeping the story alive! :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni

OMG. Zane and Michael! No! Don't let them die! :( Amazing though. Please update :D

AAAHH! What happened? You sure do know how to write a cliffhanger! Perfect timing I might add, I just started reading this yesterday, and already I'm hooked! Keep it up! The suspense is killing me! :D :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni

What? This is so intense! Those boys were so sweet. They better be ok, missy. The fate of there lives are in your hands! Haha. I want to know what happens! I hate how every chapter drops off at the most important scenes! You are causing me to get worry lines at such a young age! (jk. Completly good on that aspect) you better keep writing!

OMG. What the heck is going on here? What's up with Layton?

AMAZING! Please update :)

This was a good chapter, I thought it was quite funny, in a way. Although a little weird, and wow those guys seriously are stupid. But it was a good thin, because Jane and Zane got away.

Ik who got Jane! ;) lol Once again, LOVE the biting. ;) Remember what I said yesterday? Cause Im thinking it again. lol.

How sweet! He came to rescue her! Looks like Jane is getting her wish! And those kidnappers are REALLY bad at there job.

OMW WRITE MORE! I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS

NEXT!

That is soo sweet. The ending is really, really sad though:( I can't wait to see how it all works out.

This was a good chapter! I loved the part where Jane bit Laytons hand. (hehehehhee) And I cannot believe that Layton could be so mean to her like that!

(Although, the real version wouldn't surprise me one bit!) (jk to the folks who may be reading this, other than the person who wrote this!)

I hate this! GRRRR. Ever since I have gotten rid of my account and taken all the stories off and everything, I forget to check back to see this, and whether or not you have updated! I HATE it! Why? lol. I swear thats my new catch phrase. :P

Anyway! To the reviewing part of this little box haha.

YAYAYAYAYAYAYA! I absolutely loved this chapter! Because he FINALLY made a move on her! :D :D :D PLEASE (Stonehart) UPDATE.

I L-O-V-E. Love this story 3 i finally started reading it and i am so angry when there's no more to read but so happy when i get the email saying u posted another chapter!