|Reviews for Celestial Reign: Baying for the Moon|
| MagicalInsanity 9/10/12 . chapter 26
Ad the world turns around and make things better, just as karma does its work
Nice chapter, I love the way you make it work, and the final conversation... Let's just say I'm in bliss, having finally repaid Vladimir
| MagicalInsanity 9/10/12 . chapter 25
I cannot believe this! The outrage!
I know how the war will end, so I'm looking, quite eagerly, forward to "negotiations". I would lke nothing more than to see Vladimir pay for his disregard and lack of common sense and respect!
| MagicalInsanity 9/10/12 . chapter 24
Wow, I love those kind of negotiations, specially how Xol made herself known first thing, and how the me walking away like dog with his tail between his legs was the ambassador, that'll teach them
| MagicalInsanity 9/10/12 . chapter 23
Wow, a living, breathing, and fiery projectile; I cannot get enough of the image
Nice flow and rhythym, I like the beat of it
You can definetly write war, battles, and fights
| MagicalInsanity 9/10/12 . chapter 22
Wow, I was actually imagining that Ro's team was left to guard Ileana and Basilnar (did I got this one right?) I would find that situation ncredibly humorous.
I think it would be proper for daijinn culture to be learned by humans, then they might catch a glimpse at what Ileana and Xol have, as well as what the tattoos mean.
This was quite an intense chapter. I feel tired, though perhaps the time isn't helping either.
Awesome work, I'm falling n love with your stories all over again...
| MagicalInsanity 9/10/12 . chapter 21
I am wondering... Ro Ryuon (spelled right, right?) seems, somehow the right place for Viktor. It's more than the capital of the west, it feels like the social capital of Chuachin, a place for culture, hence education, hence art and writings and other such skills. I know it would be my place.
I like how the battle plans are progressing, and they are developing with simple flow, making it all more palpable. I love e way Xol can feel they chemistry of how her group works, and I'm intrigued about Pia, to say least...
I enjoyed Massimo's exposure, and how Amadeo and Leon would as a tag team to get him down, speciall how Xol just trust them s blindly, that it gives life to the whole event.
I'm loving your writing, and thoroughly enjoying myself x3
| MagicalInsanity 9/9/12 . chapter 20
Ohh, daijinn problems, xD
I like it, the constrast gives it life. For once, I would like to see the positions reversed; humans frowning upon the Queen and her Consort while daijinns would celebrate and through the parties.
I like the dynamics, it's amazing...
| MagicalInsanity 9/9/12 . chapter 19
Oh wow! I like the war bit; despite the dissapointment, the prospects look incredible!
I like the way you gave them important jobs, and then a designated task as they leave.
This is, all in all, incredible!
Really, wars seems to be an awesome battle to come! To protect instead of glory!
| MagicalInsanity 9/9/12 . chapter 18
And there it goes, a huge rock in the middle of the way, but there is leverage to make it move from the designated path: plague.
And there looms a wall in the horizon, far, yet visible, witness to its height and and over all length: war.
Of course, seeing it from a distance gives the advantage; they can be prepared for it.
I am amazed at the fat that Xol's old tribe appeared; apparently, surprises can be good, except for the fact of how beaten up you make them sound.
The servant should be rewarded; I bet Xol can track the fellow down with her incredible nose.
| MagicalInsanity 9/9/12 . chapter 17
Oh my! I am cackling gleefully just from that ending. Oh, so priceless! I wish I could have seen Massimo's face!
Quite a nice chapter, showing the aftermath and all it's positive-ness!
Since nothing is ever painted pink, not when it involves your writing or a good story as a matter of fact, I'm eager to see what kind of stones you're going to place in their paths. Knowing your style, it'll most likely be walls, xD
| MagicalInsanity 9/9/12 . chapter 16
Awwww, that's so sweet!
Ok, I guess this answers my precious question regarding coronations and weddings.
I have no idea why I felt that Ileana's markings were actually light, soft blue...
Will the elder realize the truth about Xol's markings when she noticed them grow? Didn't Xol was going to get Ileana a ring?
| MagicalInsanity 9/9/12 . chapter 15
Ok, this was quite overwhelming!
First, Ileana is chosen as successor of Vicenzo (lovely name, it's my grandfather's second name)
That by itself was hard enough to process, though logic dictates that it was the right path; I do need to know though, what were those suggestion that the King gave the duchess? Really racked my mind of that one but came up empty... I don't remember him ever making a suggestion...
Then, you go right ahead and dress the pair as married; that blew my mind.
And then, to top it off, the meeting...
What I don't fully understand is: did they get married, or we they simply crowned?
| MagicalInsanity 9/9/12 . chapter 14
That was wonderful news! XD I cannot help but wonder what kind of face her uncles made, xD
I like Rai; will he play a vital role or start living with the close knit tribe? He certainly seems to be prime candidate :D
I like the stories of the Guardians; will Xol get one? Must it be a wolf pup, or can it be a feline ... um, pup?
Btw: I wanted to know, when Xol's arm is burning, what happen to her clothing? Shouldn't it burn as well?
| MagicalInsanity 9/9/12 . chapter 13
Grrrr... Quite a finishing line.
Nice writing, I like the flow anyhow you make the drastic change in meetings move flawlessly.
I'm glad that Xol managed to convince some of the daijinns into helping out; now I'm intrigued about what else they'll use as payment.
Wow, I'm glad Ileana is trying to help the country, I just hope it doesn't blow in her face...
| MagicalInsanity 9/9/12 . chapter 12
I cannot help the glee coming over me, just the way you wrote was masterful.
The conversation with Massimo held the right about of outrage and anger.
Then the explanation of the tribe in front of the King and Council... it was funny, but beyond disrespect, there was a hint of gnawing insides as the uncles just spoke and tried to make all their hard work look like trash; I love the way Ileana, with held on self-control, managed to destroy their feeble attempt of destroying the tribe's hard work.
And the final moment of glee in which they are shown support...quite a delicacy, it made me thoroughly enjoy the chapter
On to the next chapter! X3