|Reviews for I Wrote a Little Story Once|
| YFIQ 10/23/12 . chapter 1
Things can be written randomly, nice poem.
| A Fire Rose 8/21/12 . chapter 1
This is a wonderful little poem! Some lines seem just a moment too long, such as "Except to throw the heart into a row." It seems just a beat longer than the rest of the lines in the stanza and shifts the rhythm just a little bit. But I absolutely love the rhythm and the words. Pretty sure any author can relate to this! The last stanza made me a bit sad, though!
| OneOriginalThing 4/7/12 . chapter 1
aww thats so cute! AND IT RHYMED! I simply adored that last little part, but it does show some real morals which i loved!
| NataFirefly 2/29/12 . chapter 1
This is a really good poem. Most Authors would never even think about coming up with this, yet here you are with this fully-blown-up awesome poem. (I actaually started singing it...)
| ColdCedric 1/30/12 . chapter 1
You need to separate some of the lines but the rest seemed great.