I have just devored this in the past day and I can't believe that I am hanging on this cliff now. Please update soon!

I really need to know why Terry is so wanted by the Master. What is so important about him? I need to know!

It's about damned time!

I am getting incredibly frustrated that no one is really explaining ANYTHING!

Love this story!

Dude my eyes are misty. Feel like such a wimp, but Kie shouldn't have to go. Cute nicknames. Til next time.

I randomly found this story and... I... Fell absolutely and completely in love. It is so awesome and feels so real. I love Kieron though he frustrates me at times and i also love Terry though he is annoying and i get mad when he is o weak. But what ever it is still an awesome story and cant wait for the update

I enjoyed reading the chapter, but oh, the drama. I hope everything will be alright. :)

I am really loving this story and I can't wait to see what happens to Kie!

Oh my goodness! If something happens to my kie-kie someone's going
to have a problem with me!

Oh my, I wasn't tearing up or anything . ._.
Kie totes did it for him &&', Terry .. D'awhh! Plus Kleo is kinda sorta awesome -
I hope that Kie will be alive *clears throat obnoxiously and stares at you* ;D

sad

Good god.

You just can't seem to get enough satisfaction out of torturing me.

Oh well.

Can't wait for the next update!

-Shay

Klee! I like her; I do. Poor old man...and Kieron is that old?! And named Kitt XD Klee is that old? Well, she's not that much older than her younger sibling.

But i like the city. Its like a mix of future (cars) and
somewhat western (horses and dirt road) that was kinda fun picturing.

The ending though TTTT

Update this soon!

Awww I love his sister! She seems so cool! I love her name, and her description! and they have nicknames! That's freaking adorable! Great work! continue soon!