|Reviews for Ghostlands Run|
| Meydri 4/6/13 . chapter 3
Really interesting so far! owo I'd love to see more of this if possible! c: It's getting überinteresting. Only a few small stuff that got wrong, and I'm not the person to talk about it. I accidentally forgot to change Sora's mother's name, so she was named two different things. Pretty awkward, hahaha. Anyway, I think that you got the feeling of every place, especially the details. I'm trying to learn how to describe stuff better. There's tons of words in swedish to describe the same thing, but since my vocabulary is limited I tend to use the same words too much. x.x But you've really got it down, from the names to details. I love your choice of words. x3 Keep it up!
| IfYouDon'tUpdateSoonI'llDie 2/26/12 . chapter 1
omg, list of reasons why I love this story (so far):
It's interesting, and makes me want to know what's going to happen next.
Derex sounds hot. I also like his personality.
Klyx is funny :D
All of the characters are interesting (in a good way )
Reasons why I don't like it:
There's only one chapter. I NEED to know what's going to happen next. D:
| Guest 2/2/12 . chapter 1
I really like it :) but I have so many questions, like who's the guy from Derex's dream? why did those three people look at Derex like they recognized him? why does he heal fast? Please, update soon.