This is fantastic! A really interesting topic and a nice take on it. Well done, I love your writing!:)

Completely unique! Unlike anything I have ever read before. Creative, intriguing, keep writing!

That is beautiful. There are no words to describe how much I liked it! I thought it was beautiful and it almost reminds me of Sherlock and Watson - (going by the last episode even though I've not watched it - heard about it though). Brilliant and its definitely my favourite.

This is amazing. I enjoyed the story like setting of the poem, and although the flow became stilted at times as you tried to make some of the words rhyme, the poem wasn't too disturbed and it was nicely done.

This was amazing, and brilliantly written. In parts, it reminded me weirdly of Sherlock and Watson and their relationship and life. But yeah, this was fantastic!

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...this is so awesome i cannot even describe the beauty of it!

I love the end where you say, "But don't tell me he's pretend/You didn't watch him die."

Wonderful! :-D

Vary vivid and beautiful, You are a brilliant author. The last few lines are sad but I love them.