DEEP! and well written, i liie the metaphors you use. it's a powerful piece

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Wow, this is an amazing poem. You're a really good writer and I agree that your use of diction is phenomenal!

I hope you find closure with your relationship with your mom and yourself.

love your use of diction in this. its almost sarcastic, but there's a beautiful, desperation quality to it.

This is such an intense piece!

I love it. It makes me sad and angry all at once.

I love your expression of the proportions. It's very inventive.

Great job!