|Reviews for Swoon Song|
| Natari Mirumura 6/12/12 . chapter 1
Very nice. Keep it up :D
| the-lovely-anomaly 6/4/12 . chapter 1
Is it bad that I blushed at this? Yes, it's somewhat jolting, but it's incredibly clever and, I think, well-handled. Nice work.
| East-0f-Eden 4/25/12 . chapter 1
pretty icky and crass...not sure what i think.
| Princess-anna57 3/16/12 . chapter 1
Wow, that's pretty graphic yet incredibly clever. O_O Creative indeed! Keep writing!
| darkershadeofpale 2/18/12 . chapter 1
I like the wordplay in the title. Swoon, like Swan. But then, we already know that you're clever.
You know, I never thought about it quite that way, but it's true. You're so good at drawing attention to the clever/quirky bits of reality, and then spinning them into interesting words.
.darker shade of pale
| nickyO 2/11/12 . chapter 1
A little icky on this one Punslinger, too clinical and reminds girls of something that actually hurts regardless of what romance fiction would have people believe.
| SirScott 2/3/12 . chapter 1
Not really for sure what to think about this one.