This was soooo good! I loved it! I think I read it a while ago but I forgot to review so I is doin it now...

This was freakin amazin! :D

"Turned on? Hell, yes."

Now that's a line! This is one of your best one-shots ever! Although I have to say, your Benedict's Car Systems was much hotter. This was still impressive though.

hahah...nice shot aydaden... hahaha...luk, even am not able to stop myself from laughing...it was fun...total fun... am readin n enjoyin it amid my exam tension... i too hate skoooool!

I really love your stories! This one definitely makes the top 3 of the ones I've read that you've written. Can just ask something? I was wondering...have you ever considered doing an M rated story? I mean, a lot of the ones you write have a lot of references to sex but you've never actually written a 'real' one. Personally, I think you'd be great at writing an M rated piece. Could you please, please, please give it a shot?

hahahhah that was awesome!

Hell yes! Now this is a good story, you should definetly keep writing! Loved everything about it, your a very good writer! :)