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| Reviews for Dimension 1: Draconic Rising |
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  Armel 6/17/12 . chapter 20 Awesome Chapter as always. Try to make the ending ones a bit longer by a hundred or so words per chapter. |
 madin4561 6/16/12 . chapter 20COOL, I CAN LOG IN THROUGH FF! :D Yeah... You just love killing people, don't you? -.- Oh! You should put the dead bodies in front of the enemy and make them trip Mwahahaha... The beginning was sorta boring / Seriously, think about the tripping thing :) THE LAST LITTLE PIG WENT WEE WEE WEE WEE ALL THE DAY HOME |
| Armel 5/28/12 . chapter 19 great chapter as usual |
| madin456 5/21/12 . chapter 18 What is this becoming? The Hunger Games? Please, no! *Knocks on wood* So many people dying _ And some other people are going to die too -.- DON'T MAKE IT LIKE THE HUNGER GAMES PLEASE! NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU LIKE IT! . |
| Armel 5/21/12 . chapter 18 awesome lol |
| Armel 5/18/12 . chapter 17 epic as usual! |
| madin456 4/27/12 . chapter 17 Huh, someone died... And you have a lot of formations... So, why's the title 'Science Homework Part 2'? Uh...yeah. |
| madin456 4/25/12 . chapter 16 FINALLY YOU PUT LINE BREAKS -.- 'permission to punch the officer.' JUMP! of da cliff and dieeeeeeee. in a hole. |
| me again armel 4/19/12 . chapter 13 good... |
| Armel 4/19/12 . chapter 15 Good chapter as always... |
| madin456 4/18/12 . chapter 15 a LOT of swearing...O_O ...they almost died...THEY ALMOST DIED! i want someone to die...then dig a hole for them to be buried in! without a gravestone. to review #24 and beyond! (sorry...it was tempting :D) |
| madin456 4/14/12 . chapter 14 the ending before the first line break would've been so much more affective if there actually was a line break... and what happened to emy? emmmmmmmy! um...very suspenceful and...uh, yeah...i'm gonna leave now... DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN. |
| madin456 4/10/12 . chapter 13 lol, 'emily exploded.' nice way to describe that XD ...'the-frown-that-I-cannot-possibly-see-but-I-kno w-it's-there' -.- wooooooow. ummmmm...yeah, 'kay. bye! |
| JosieHosiedaNinja 3/29/12 . chapter 12 Emily crashed into a window... I want to do that... Arman smokes...? ...ok ricocheted... what does that mean...? Arman takes a menacing step towards me huh? I kill him _ "more intellectual friends" that's true... everyone is smarter than me... I wanna be smart... Emily hits me with her rifle D: ...owie Haha Justin opens the door and rolls in... I wanna do that day... Well nice job on this chapter! ... sorry I suck at reviews... (_ _)" |
| madin456 3/29/12 . chapter 12 some ending... there were lots of dialogue...and dialogue...not enough description...except for the beginning...know what? i actually don't know what i wanna say -.- yeah, okay. i'll leave now...WEEEEEEEEE. |
