|Reviews for Dimension 1: Draconic Rising|
| Armel 6/17/12 . chapter 20
Awesome Chapter as always. Try to make the ending ones a bit longer by a hundred or so words per chapter.
| madin4561 6/16/12 . chapter 20
COOL, I CAN LOG IN THROUGH FF! :D
You just love killing people, don't you? -.- Oh! You should put the dead bodies in front of the enemy and make them trip Mwahahaha...
The beginning was sorta boring /
Seriously, think about the tripping thing :)
THE LAST LITTLE PIG WENT WEE WEE WEE WEE ALL THE DAY HOME
| Armel 5/28/12 . chapter 19
great chapter as usual
| madin456 5/21/12 . chapter 18
What is this becoming? The Hunger Games? Please, no! *Knocks on wood* So many people dying _
And some other people are going to die too -.-
DON'T MAKE IT LIKE THE HUNGER GAMES PLEASE! NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU LIKE IT! .
| Armel 5/21/12 . chapter 18
| Armel 5/18/12 . chapter 17
epic as usual!
| madin456 4/27/12 . chapter 17
Huh, someone died...
And you have a lot of formations...
So, why's the title 'Science Homework Part 2'?
| madin456 4/25/12 . chapter 16
FINALLY YOU PUT LINE BREAKS -.-
'permission to punch the officer.'
JUMP! of da cliff and dieeeeeeee. in a hole.
| me again armel 4/19/12 . chapter 13
| Armel 4/19/12 . chapter 15
Good chapter as always...
| madin456 4/18/12 . chapter 15
a LOT of swearing...O_O
...they almost died...THEY ALMOST DIED! i want someone to die...then dig a hole for them to be buried in! without a gravestone.
to review #24 and beyond! (sorry...it was tempting :D)
| madin456 4/14/12 . chapter 14
the ending before the first line break would've been so much more affective if there actually was a line break...
and what happened to emy? emmmmmmmy!
um...very suspenceful and...uh, yeah...i'm gonna leave now...
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN.
| madin456 4/10/12 . chapter 13
lol, 'emily exploded.' nice way to describe that XD
...'the-frown-that-I-cannot-possibly-see-but-I-kno w-it's-there' -.- wooooooow.
ummmmm...yeah, 'kay. bye!
| JosieHosiedaNinja 3/29/12 . chapter 12
Emily crashed into a window... I want to do that...
Arman smokes...? ...ok
ricocheted... what does that mean...?
Arman takes a menacing step towards me huh? I kill him _
"more intellectual friends" that's true... everyone is smarter than me... I wanna be smart...
Emily hits me with her rifle D: ...owie
Haha Justin opens the door and rolls in... I wanna do that day...
Well nice job on this chapter!
... sorry I suck at reviews... (_ _)"
| madin456 3/29/12 . chapter 12
there were lots of dialogue...and dialogue...not enough description...except for the beginning...know what? i actually don't know what i wanna say -.-
yeah, okay. i'll leave now...WEEEEEEEEE.