|Reviews for fictional realities|
| steffxnie 4/14/12 . chapter 1
I love the emotions in this.
| bri 3/26/12 . chapter 1
ouch, this is so freaking sad.
honestly, i just... i'm so sad now, and look at that! you made me sad just by writing something sad. it could have been you decided to write something sad and no one felt anything about it, but when you write, your emotions transfer to the reader, so so well. it's so beautiful.
i could sing my life to you with this guitar in my hand and the lyrics could weave an intricate tale but you'd tell me the melody was off-
first of all, so amazingly written. an intricate tale - it sounds so light and delicate, and then it goes so sad - you'd tell me the melody was off.
the part about painting him and then stripping off all the layers was haunting. the whole thing about it being an act, that so good. "we are all so selfish; we are so desperate." i love it.
that ending was so eerie. i fell in love.
now i'm listening to safe and sound by taylor swift ft. civil wars. more useless information.
| recycle rhymes 2/4/12 . chapter 1
when you wrote "main and kill" I think you meant "maim and kill" at the end of the second paragraph. I like how the title is a juxtaposition. also, how it seems realistic at the beginning, but then you realize that it could just be an imagined situation. the voice was also well written.