|Reviews for Love Lessons|
| Facella 1/3/13 . chapter 6
I really like your story. But it's all a bit rushed. And I think you could add in a bit more descriptions. There's mostly just dialogue and it makes it kind of hard to really relate to Noah. I mean, sure, it's horrible what he's going through, but how does he feel?
And PLEASE don't end this here. It wouldn't be satisfying at all! ;_;
| sunny-california 3/25/12 . chapter 6
keep it going it getting really good
| yaoi8808 3/24/12 . chapter 6
KEEP GOING! RAWR THIS DINO COMMANDS YOU!
| 6xXBladeXx9 3/7/12 . chapter 5
Was NOT expecting that one right there. Wooo ._.
Definatelyyy looking forward to that next update. Wow /
| CharlieTehUnicron 3/7/12 . chapter 2
| Katie-apple-easy-mac 3/1/12 . chapter 4
You have a great storyline although i think you could do more describing. If you need some help with the description you should try reading some other male on male stories so you can detail yours more.
| Subbie 2/29/12 . chapter 4
it would be nice to have some sort of time line to start like, "few hours later or few weeks later" as it seems sorta jumpy, but Good job elsewise!
| Blank Papyrus 2/29/12 . chapter 4
Oh snap. I can't believe he said that
| SiahXSiren 2/24/12 . chapter 3
Omg. Last chap was was so sad! Story is heartbreaking. Update soon
| Subbie 2/23/12 . chapter 3
Nice job, but you're right, way too short. Good job tho...
On the other hand, I'm having a helluva time uploading stuff, are you?
| Gimme Back My Pigeon 2/23/12 . chapter 3
Aww man this is awesome. Update soon! I'm a fan :)
| harrylover21 2/23/12 . chapter 3
Nice work! I like this story!
| 6xXBladeXx9 2/21/12 . chapter 2
This story...is beautiful. It really is ._. you had me giggling and gasping while reading this, its just..wow.
You just got yourself a dedicated reader, and if you need any help- any at all- just let me know and I'll be more than happy to help
Keep up the awesome T_T
| SweetChoco71 2/20/12 . chapter 2
So far, so good. :) Except, the chapter was a little short, but it was still interesting. I think it's funny how his client is in love with him. Can't wait for the next chapter
| SweetChoco71 2/10/12 . chapter 1
The concept of this story is really interesting. I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters. But yes, I feel like there isn't enough description when it comes to how Noah feels. The dialogue seems a little awkward too, unless that's what you were aiming for. Despite those things, this story is good :)