First attempt at a poem ever, huh?
I have to say, it's really not bad at all.
It's actually pretty well done.

The opening of this piece (I'm tired of pretending,/Being somebody I'm not./It's exhausting, really.) is probably my favorite part.

And the subject matter is something that basically anyone can relate to.

Yup. Nice job(:

-Allegra

This is written quite well and are you okay? If you NEED to talk just PM me. Regardless even if you don't know me then we can talk if you feel comfortable enough. Really it is okay.