Hey Monty,

I don't know how to say this. When you started this story, it was good. Not great, but it had some interest and kept the imagination alive and whatever.

I dunno what happened though, dude. It got really boring and tedious toward the end, and I kept thinking to myself "why? It shouldn't have gone like that."

Also, the english got progressively worse as the story went on. I understand that English isn't your first language, so I can forgive that. Just touch up on it now and then.

I'm really sorry for the bad review. I really didn't want to do it, but I see it as constructive criticism. Better luck next time, buddy :)

LeaderOfTheDamned

Hey, buddy. I gotta be honest, I'm having a really tough time getting into this story. I dunno what it is, but this one doesn't stand out as much as the others. Still waiting in anticipation for the next chapter, though :D

Ok, wow. It's totally different from life1 and 2, but still the same :) I like it a lot.

So far, life 2 is still my favorite, but I'm a sucker for depression.

I'm uber curious as to who that smiling chick was.

Some grammar errors, but overall good show, man :)

Keep up the good work.

LeaderOfTheDamned