Never knew you liked Taylor Swift :) This chapter was cute with them both confessing to each other! :D Update soon!

There was so much tension and jealousy going on right now! Continue soon!

omg why, wait thats so saddening, but great to the plot line, but still really saddening. :(

please please more... :D have fun at mardi gras

Oooh, I can really feel the heat now! :P S-P-E-C-T-A-C-U-L-A-R!

Thanks for updating it soo fast! I'm looking forward to see what happens next! :D

I really like Cameron's name, both first and last. I think Home is supposed to be capatilized (HOME). You only have a couple of typos, though. This is a pretty good story, Kayla-la-lupsy.

ohmygod! not what i expected, which is a good thing! lol, i wonder how she will accomplish that without changing herself? an happy belated valentines day! an have fun on your retreat :)

whoa. this was really good. it makes me wonder whether Kaleb really likes her or he's just using her to win :)

and i wonder how he got to the school faster than they did too!

hmm, there were some typographical errors here, but not as many and obvious as before, which is great :)

*i noticed you said 'new' instead of 'knew' a lot

update soon!

- d.

whoa, real mean Queen.

wonder what she wants with Kaleb

oh! slaves and royalty ... cool, yeah, it looks like it's not going to be easy for them :)

driver seems nice

- d.

wow. this is almost like Hunger Games but like for royalty ... i really enjoyed reading this! but the events kind of went too fast, maybe you could put more scenes in between, like in the car, you could make the conversations longer and stuff. and in the part where they were picking people for The Choosing, you could add more people who got picked too, maybe two more. i mean, i know that they just switched to that channel towards the end, but when her name was called, it was too fast ... yeah. that's my opinion at least, but you could do whatever you want, i mean you're the writer. oh, and maybe when she was leaving, you could put her little brother there begging her not to go ... and stuff

oh! wonder what the Queen meant by 'Well too bad'

i have a feeling I'll hate her :)

really good concept though

-d.

Wow, keep writing. You've got me hooked already! Please update soon!

you did not disapoint, fillers and clif hangers are amazing! i cant wait for your next chapter!

update soon because this story sounds like its going to be great!

ohmygoodness, ive never fell inlove with a story by just one chapter but i love this, please dont stop writing this ever...:)