Well, you win the race to update :)
I've been attempting to, but it takes so loooooong with just one hand :(

Anyway, another amazing chapter! My feelings are so messed up right now, I feel as if my heart has been dragged on an 100 mile cross-country run! - Throughout this whole story I've gone from laughing to nearly actually crying... and then the end of this chapter... oh my god, words cannot describe.

You are a fabulous writer x

Oh this chapter all came together so well! I loved the turmoil. I loved the ending. I love that Mason didn't give up.

'This is why he pushes everyone away because it's easier forcing the rejection than facing it.' And I love these little truths you put in. I think we've all had some experience of this.

I'm wondering if there is more to the mugging after what happened in the previous chapter, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see :)

Can't wait for the next,

Sukix

Poor Doug. I'm not sure who I feel sorry for, Doug or Mason. At least Masons hanging in there and Dougs opening up more. I get the feeling James is behind the mugging, as he has a problem with Doug. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Amazing chapter, just beautiful! I love how perfectly flawed all your characters are, it would have been weird and unreal if Mase had not gotten angry with Doug's attitude, so when he did it was perfect. we get to see him struggle with his emotions, but also we get to see how inherently good he is! The whole time he doesnt want to be mad and he always thinks about how Doug is feeling, and it is this that really makes him a wonderful man and match for Doug! And poor Doug, rough day:( But I bet he and Mase's relationship will be stronger after this:)
and don't worry about replying, I know you read all ur comments and I just like to let authors know how much I love their stories! Can't wait for the next update :)

Awww another good chapter :) can wait to see what the surprise about masons brother is. I'm gonna guess he is his twin or something. Anyway it was great I'm glad Doug let his defense down. I understand why he did it but still glad mason got through to him.

Aw, this chapter made me sad. But as always, it was very well written. Good job. :) Can't wait for more. Love these two and Doug needs to just let Mason in-it would be beneficial for the both of them.

Oh. Wow. This story is... just wow. I heart the characters so much, more and more as we learn about them.

Right when I got around to reviewing the chapter before, it got updated. Don't worry, this is not a complaint. Poor Doug. But in a way this was good because now their connection will inevitably grow stronger. James has to be tied into this. I wanna punch him in his fugly face. That damn scoundrel.
Anyway, thanks for the post. Looking forward to the next!

*sniff*

Yes, Mason, Doug needs you :')
*sigh* I can't even say anything else, my mind is in a big mush.

Lovely chapter that had all my feelings in a muddle;
-Blade

Eek! He better be okay. I know you won't seriously hurt him, but still! The anticipation for your next update is surely present. If it is James, then I'm only goung to hate him even more. He is super gross. On a different not, I love how Mason and Doug are in the stage of their relationship where the giddy-ness is just pouring out. So mushy and cute. Keep up the awesome work!
Looking forward to your next update!

awwww! so sweet! Doug, don't you dare break up with him, he is adorable! I mean it is a little odd that he mason likes him so much so early, but I guess when you know you know:)

NOO DOUG NO WHY WHY NO WHY WHERE IS MASON ARGHH
Anddd Julia don't you be waving at Mason's man. Noo.
*dies*

This was really really good, I liked how it was in Doug's POV...I like Doug. (:
Aw, man. I was totally looking forward to some cute fluff, them going for dinner and being all cute...
*sniff*
When this conflict is over I hope I get some fluff :P

Wonderful chapter as always!
Blade

Dougie! Noooooo!
How can you hurt Mason's poor little Scotty-dog! D:
Can't wait for am update... no. Really. I can't! _

Hello! I just recently stumbled on this story and I just wanted to say I think it's brilliant! I live Doug he reminds me so much of me it's funny sometimes but the end of this chapter was horrible! I hope Doug is ok :((( anyway great story hope to see more soon.

Nooooo! Poor Doug!

Great build up to the cliffhanger, I was very creeped out reading it, you really put in my mind all those suspenseful horror films! Those car parks ARE terrifying!

I love how Doug has become all protective:)

'My stomach is in knots: like an earphone cable that's been lying quite happily in my pocket until I want to use it and suddenly it's tangled to hell.' This is my absolute favorite description XD

I'll be waiting by my email for your next update;P

Sukix