CUUUUUUTTTEEEE! Doug. is. just. too. cute. ... milk and cookies, seriously? awww!

Pleasepleaseplease update! Mason and Doug are just too adorable together!

Much love! :D

What I really like about the way this story is written is how you often briefly describe the events of the previous chapter from the other guy's POV. Thanks to that we know what both of the main characters were thinking and feeling at that time.

The plot is really interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Aw, sweet chapter- I like Mason (but Doug is still my favorite)

Ah I laughed when Mason said he liked being a pain in the ass to his boss XD

Look forward to more!

Suki

I love this story SOOOOOOO much. Wow. just wow.

I just love everything about it! Poor irish kid moves to america and gets rich but still refuses to become a bigheaded rich snob even though he's rather rude. (although he has damn good reasons!) normally I wouldn't curse on a review but since Doug has no problem doing it regularly I will ignore that rule of mine. XD

Okay, so lets move on to Mason. I love him almost as much as I love Doug. He broke through Doug's barriers and saw the broken boy underneath! So cute. And he didn't drop him when Doug puked on him, which I'm not sure many people (including myself) could do. He's just such a good guy. They are perfect together and I can't wait to read about them getting closer and maybe Mason can help get the prickles out eh? :D

Lastly...there's Marianne who is AWESOME. She sees through Doug's front too. And she's also motherly which Doug obviously needs. I love this crew! oh...and I hate Mason's boss. He should be fired.

So as you can see...I love this...and if you decide to discontinue it (which always seems to happen to my favorites) I will be extremely EXTREMELY upset. So please don't okay? (:

Love this. You're great. It's great. I'll be patiently (impatiently) waiting for the next add! :D

Aww this story so cure plz update soon :)

Another lovely chapter. Mason is so adorable, and he only become more adorable as the story continues.

I love how you go back and forth between point of views. Its quite refreshing.

look forward to the next chapter, as always, thanks for sharing.

Ah, nothing says love like vomit all over the work clothes.

The scene at the end made me giggle. So pissed off with no milk for his cookies xD

Mason swearing is actually throwing me off x) Doug does it and it's like 'whatever', then Mason swears and the whole world falls off its axis xD

Very good characterization. I want more description of Doug, his body type specifically, coz I keep picturing a scrawny-ass Ron Weasley, and that ain't hot. LOL. More soon?

-REB

Nawwww, he wants milk with his cookies. That's adorable. :3 You did a great job on this chapter, can't wait for more. :)

Oh I love Doug and his needless worrying! It's great read

Suki.

(Hahaha I'm curious as to the 'fuck' count in this one;P it's got to be well above the average XD)

Favorite chapter so far. Nice job, looking forward to more.

-REB

Oh. My. Gosh.

*giggles like a derp*

You have me smiling like such a retard!

I have one hell of an important exam tomorrow and I'm stressed to so many extents, but you just melted all that stress away with this, not only cuz of the sweetness of the story but cuz of those cookies, you made my day! Week even!

*sigh*

Mason is adorable, by the way. I could put him in a box and keep him forever :D and Doug...teehee, he's so cute. Mason'll treat you right Doug, don't worry ;D

You're the best, DS :D

-6xXBladeXx9

PS : I LURRV YOU *heart*

Silly little Doug. What a little tool xD

Mason, still being too sweet to exist, while Doug just sits there and denies it all.

They're soooo cuuuute.

I don even...

Lessee. I don't even wanna try and come up with constructive criticism. Oh, there's an easy one. Lookee here: "Doug grunts but I just can't let it drop, 'Well that's just not true is it, because you're out on this one?' " The comma before the quotations is the problem. If it's a comma then it's one continuous sentence, and there shouldn't be a new paragraph. If you're gonna break it off into a new paragraph (which you should if it's a new speaker), put a period. Like in this example the verb doesn't need to be transitive. So, here I'd make it a new sentence, but if it was like "said" or something it'd stay one sentence. It's a typo I keep seeing in this story, I've really never seen it before. Not grammatically correct, but not terribly incorrect either. So. Yeah.

That probably made no sense.

-REB