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Go, Ashley! I really like it!U dont need to say you are beggin', its cool!

Flames suck, just remember that, especially if they have no meaning rhyme or reason. Just disreguard the mean things others said, you did a fine job! The people were just a tad mad that they were reading a novel in an anime section ^_^ Ah well, just work on your spelling and you'll be fine! The last chapter was a little hurried in my opinion, and i konw i spelled Hermione wrong, i just hope i corected it, i added a new chapter, so you should check that out!

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great job!
LOL if anyone is reading this, this is the auther of 17. this is my 1st fanfic and i'm tryin. Its cgning to be a really long story so give it time.

oo..k........*sees no point to story yet*and if there is a point its probably that his parents have been keepigng the secret theyre actually SOME kind of monster(warewolf..sometin lke that*..boring...and..WHY DID U USE 3chapters.wenu couldhave used 1?¿?¿...also if u tried to use the Zodiac..Toreros..should be Taurus.....think before u write...sry if this is discouriging..but..ure not givin me much option...im sure if u READ others ppl fics ull get better ideas..OR ullse how to write a new story..thats what i did..ive only writen ONE stry so far..but..well...good luck

Um, where's the Anime part of this? And why do you have 3 chapters when 1 would suffice? Finally, is there any point so far? I don't see one.

HEY SOUNDS COOL I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS!!!AND I MEAN IT ITD COOL
IF ANYONE TELL YOU DIFFERENT WHO CARES THE ONLY THING THAT MATTERS IS THAT YOU LIKE IT!!!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!