|Reviews for The Music Box|
| Twixie03 2/12/12 . chapter 1
This is going to be sooo good! Hope you update soon!
| emm 2/12/12 . chapter 1
i really like it hope you continue :)
| Anonymous Is Me 2/12/12 . chapter 1
Good job! This is pretty interesting, I may need to look into it further. Just one grammar mistake:
-This is a little thing, but you accidentally put a space between 'other' and 's' in the sentence 'So I do nothing as they get up with a couple of other s and approach her.'