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Erysimum 2/21/12 . chapter 1I love short poems, this one was very intriguing :) but a teensy concrit- the phrase "all the more worse" doesn't exist; it would just be "all the worse". Never mind about the grammar thing, I think that would probably flow better too. I like people to point out my grammar errors, so I hope you don't mind! |
Let's See If It Moves 2/15/12 . chapter 1Short but effective. Well done! Baaaaaaa, Ewe. |