|Reviews for Delilah Jones|
| SmashedIce.X 2/15/12 . chapter 1
This is really good, a sad story but brilliantly well written as always.
| NearlyPrescient 2/13/12 . chapter 1
really liked the lines "were gone. They disappeared one day. / Smoke from a crushed cigarette." great metaphor. and the shift in the piece right then was pretty incredible, just the change in tone and the sheer violence of it.
I also really liked the ending lines. there's something about it that's hopeful and at the same time defeated. a very effective mix.