jeez you made me cry, Kay! too emotional! kidding, it is perfect. i really really really love it.

The plot thickens! This is a great chapter, your writing and choice of words (especially when she is running away) is really strong and makes for a good connection with what is going on. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Probably my favorite chapter so far :) Awesome awesome awesome

i really liked it! especially the flash backs. UPDATE MORE WOMAN!

Wow. This is amazing. I couldn't stop reading, it's so captivating. The character development and plot are well-written and easy to understand (well, easy as far as angels and death goes). Really awesome, well done :D

just a couple of grammar mistakes here and there but its easy to figure out. *calm. basically the only one. and i love the 'kay' bit. laughed out loud. Yeah. i love it!

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. i just love it. fantastic writing, intriguing storyline which makes the reader want to find out more about characters and plot. KEEP WRITING.