|Reviews for Different World|
| lethaldoze 5/24/13 . chapter 25
dhur too lazy to sign in!
I dunno why but the moment i read the darius thing i suddenly thought that maybe nathan is the mole! Oh shit! Is he? Cause I like him!
Okay so Evan is pretty straight forward and unwavering about what he wants to do. which i think is a good thing. God I love this guy! Amr ken jani khub hashi ashche eita pore when everyone was lifting Jess's morale and fred hotat kore pura realistic kotha bola shuru korse!
Uff Jared is being such an emo! He needeth changeth!
Also wow Josh wayyyy to pop the question! Jill etto unprepared chilo for this! But yea I want em togther more in future chapters! Also Evan and Jess and now I have a new pair I'm quite interested in. Gwen and Jared. I just want to knw how they fix things between them!
Well, update soon! P5 e r ki porbi? Likh notun chapter boshe!
| Carmel March 5/19/13 . chapter 25
I always enjoy reading this story. I was having a kind of stressful day and I just told myself I could procrastinate for a few minutes by catching up with this. I loved this chapter, loved the ending. Optimistic note indeed! :) Keep up the amazing work and I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter!
| LeUndeadRabidChipmunk 5/15/13 . chapter 25
what the fillibusters?! that was so out of the blue i nearly fell off my chair! whoa! as in Joshua just askin her to get married, crap! also, Carrera, i dunno why but it made me chuckle! Darius has someone on the inside huh. sheesh. there's a few shady suckers in there, yes, but i wonder how they'd get skilled nuff to sneak out from under the Council's nose...and if they can, that can't be good news. hey, does Lexi still have wind powers? or was that like a baby-talk version of her actual powers? i like her more now just so you know! eek, turning invisible and doin things just about everywhere, even with people around, kinky little bunnies ain't we? someone needs to blast em with something while they're at it! ]
| Carmel March 5/5/13 . chapter 24
Oh my goodness, I can't even tell you how thrilled I was to see this update! This chapter was great (no surprise there), and I sense things are getting more and more complicated, which I just love. Keep up the absolutely fabulous work and I'll be eagerly awaiting more!
| LeUndeadRabidChipmunk 5/2/13 . chapter 24
whoa whoa whoa whoa, Hope can go invisible now! and is it weird if i find this getting new powers thing to be somewhat like hitting puberty?! . oh, i was expecting more of those dark dudes after you gave that intro, but ya, din get much! i just do not get this weirdass thing between Jared and Fred man. but shit man, Lexi got the same powers as Jared! i thought they were actually getting invaded at that point, like, by dark people. but ya, i think she's hotter now! also,
''This guy stayed away from everyone else but he seemed to know more than others''
ooh, inspired are we? xP feels like you're gearing up to tie up whatever needs tying up before things go Kablooey. put in some minor stuff going Kablooey from now on!
| Lethaldoze 5/1/13 . chapter 24
So Lexi got the same power as Jared right. The whole being able to torture people thing. And is that why Jess suddenly felt that pain in her ankle towards the beginning when Lexi was trying to show her her powers?
Okay, what did Joshua see. That what was wrong with what scenerio?
Dude I love Jared and Gwen as a pair. Mostly because they are so complicated. And I am so curiously to see how at this point they can get things right between them again.
I was reading and reading and no Evan was coming up and I was like I'll kill you voman if I don't find him here. But then he was. :3 And Jess and him are like awesome as usual. How they don't keep anything from each other.
Okay, weird vibe but will Fiona have feelings for Evan or something? Complications! I love complications!
Anyway, thanks for the villain reminder, I really did forget!
Update soon! (I mean I know you can't. But you know right after the first week of June I want a chapter! )
| Nyx'sReincarnation 3/12/13 . chapter 23
Amazing chapter! Yeah... I think I should re-read this story. I cant really remember specifics of any characters... What exactly did Jess do? Something important, but I can't tell who's on what side... Anyway, I like how you've got a bit of each plotline in this chapter even though it's not meant to focus on them directly.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
| Lethaldoze 3/6/13 . chapter 23
Oh God! Do you know I had to read the entire story again! Took me two whole days to get it done!
I forgot who lexi was and I kept mixing up between Hope and Gwen. And I was like fuck this shit...I'm doing it from the top again. (I literally drooled all over bio book last night when I fell asleep halfway through chapter 21).
Anyway, let's get on with the chapter review. Fred and Gwen against Jared. Wow! That should be interesting. Jared should be well aware of that phrase...i forgot the phrase myself but it went something like..'nothing more scarier than a woman scorned' or something like that.
Evan and Fiona? Working together? And he smiled? O_O :3
Jared suspecting Jess...well that was bound to happen.
The Jess thing was an eyeopener and you wrote it just fine. So she really is going to sacrifice herself huh? Wonder what Evan will do about that!
Can't wait. Update faster for heaven's sake so I don't have to read the entire story every time you update a new chapter!
P.S.: I updated Seth too..incase you didn't notice. -_-"
| Water Balloon 3/3/13 . chapter 23
YAY! Oh my gosh, it's definitely been a while!
The chapter was good, although to better understand it, I need to go back and read some more.
So yay again! Hope you have a great day! Can't wait to read more!
| Carmel March 3/3/13 . chapter 23
I have honestly missed reading this story so much. I didn't forget any of the characters, and I thoroughly enjoyed getting insight into Jess' story. This chapter was wonderful; I enjoy your writing so much. I'm really REALLY looking forward to more! :)
| LeUndeadRabidChipmunk 3/3/13 . chapter 23
you finally got around to Jess's story! you know what's worse than a cliffy? a cliffy on hiatus! (badum-tss) baaad jokes aside, tell us what's with Jess already! NOW! know what's awesome bout D.W though? there's these people who're supposed to be good guys, but are just bloody unsettling! there's Jared and for some reason, i find Fred that way too! make them creepier! ] LOVE creepy good guys! *_* also, no more of this beating around the bush business, the Jess thing is killing me, BRING IT OUT, NEXT CHAP! and don go awol again, i'll go 'locked room' on you if you do :3
| Irony'sFriend 11/11/12 . chapter 13
Gwen and Jared are so adorable 3 Loved this chapter!
But what will happen to Jess...
| Irony'sFriend 11/10/12 . chapter 12
First off, I looked at the new picture of Joshua that you posted on your profile, and that guys is MUCH better than the previous one. Seriously, you should stick with this one because he is a lot closer to what I pictured of Joshua.
Secondly, I found one tiny mistake that was probably just because you were in a hurry. Not a big deal :)
"I'll be happy to take you to Jill or Joshua, since there are no other patients apart from you today. But I think it's better to not disturb Jill or Joshua right now."
Just a little confusing lol.
But anyway, awesome chapter! I loved seeing Kevin and Hope enter the party :D Also, the weird relationship between Fred and Evan is just hilarious. I love it so much!
| Irony'sFriend 11/6/12 . chapter 11
Aw, I thought this chapter was cute :3 I like seeing the different couples interact.
Though I am concerned for Lexi. She seems so innocent, and I hate the thought of what she must be going through...
| Irony'sFriend 11/6/12 . chapter 10
Somehow, I'm not very surprised that Joshua knows dark magic. Still, it came in handy! :D
This chapter was so filled with action, and it was awesome! The battle scenes were great, and you evened out the action well with the inserts from the other characters. You did a great job!
Oh! I went to your profile and looked at all the links, and wow! Seriously, most of the pictures were almost exactly what I pictured o_o The only big differences were Jess and Joshua, but your appearances match the personalities very well!