|Reviews for SkinTight|
| Blumiru 2/17/12 . chapter 1
This is pretty damn good!
Short, but it gets the point across by implying [A Fate Worse Than Death]. Or, at least, I think that's what it's implying. Very mysterious.
The blinks served as interesting pauses between the action, denoting the passage of time quite well, although I was sort of startled by the end- why would she smile?
Otherwise, great story!
| GHOTIfish 2/16/12 . chapter 1
nice and suspenseful
love all the blinks and uncertainty in it
sounds like a regular prologue keep up the awesome work!