|Reviews for Outbreak|
| Guest 1/11/13 . chapter 4
REALLY good imagery, character coping, and 'zombie portrayment'. i may like your story yet.
| Omnipotent-Mind 8/24/12 . chapter 36
Great read. One of the few good zombie stories I have found on here. Looking forward to your next creation.
| Jet Blackstorm 6/14/12 . chapter 25
You just have to write more of this fantastic story! :D I've been reading this since it was first published onto this website and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story. Keep up the good work. :)
| a r t e m i s 0 s i m e t r a 5/26/12 . chapter 1
Hiya. Thanks for the link :-D.
Congratulations: the first paragraph skilfully grabbed me and sucked me into the story.
After reading the first chapter, I'm sufficiently 'into' the flow that I'm keen to get lost in the unfolding chapters. So kudos.
I actually liked the narrator a lot :-D. The tone and personality of the narrative voice was just very appealing to me. Someone whose company I feel good about spending the rest of the book with - something that isn't true of a some of the published novels that I've read :-P.
I also like the way that it isn't clear what sex or ethnicity the narrator is (unless I missed something!)
The only constructive criticism I have is to possibly break up some of the longer sentences . . . . that was the only thing that really broke up the flow of the narrative for me. But others may completely disagree - and I'm absolutely no expert.
In summary, I like this a lot and will definitely keep reading! :-) Though I may give one long review every two to three chapters: I'm going to try to really get into it as if it were something I'd downloaded from Amazon.
Oh, and hope you've had an awesome weekend thus far. With no hulking-out. - Ax
| BrokenThunder 5/4/12 . chapter 10
Oh nooooooooo. Please be immune!
| BrokenThunder 5/4/12 . chapter 4
This is so good!
| BrokenThunder 5/4/12 . chapter 3
I can't stop reading! Great job!
Onto chapter four!
| BrokenThunder 5/4/12 . chapter 2
This is kinda scaring me... lol
On to chapter three now!
| Alter 5/3/12 . chapter 18
I really wasn't expecting to like this story, then, suddenly, chapter 18.
| thetabbykitteh 4/30/12 . chapter 16
Wow this story is amazingly good.
| thetabbykitteh 4/30/12 . chapter 1
Wow I loved this. It is amazing, and I will be keeping an eye out for more.
| TheDeadAreHungry 4/9/12 . chapter 1
Really amazing. I love your style and timing, and the details and descriptions are perfect. Can't wait to read more from you. One of the best authors here.