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LetsJustRideAway 3/6/12 . chapter 17Ohh, I knew Blake's plan was gonna be trouble... but then again, everything is going to be trouble in a murder case lol |
LetsJustRideAway 3/2/12 . chapter 16I feel like Blake's plan is just going to get them in even more trouble XP Great chapter! Keep it up! |
LetsJustRideAway 3/1/12 . chapter 6Maybe Cody spills the beans... hmmmmmm... Still awesome . |
LetsJustRideAway 3/1/12 . chapter 4Blake is bad news... but I'm glad they're thinking about their reactions, though. It adds more info about the characters |
LetsJustRideAway 3/1/12 . chapter 3I think John is going to be the one who gets the other two in trouble. He's not as cold as Blake and John. He'll probably end up telling someone. Still very good :) |
LetsJustRideAway 3/1/12 . chapter 1I like it so far :) i did see some typos, but not enough to really take away from the awesome plot. Also, you seemed to repeat yourself, I notice when you wrote he poured water over the rag, damping it with his water bottle. It could be re-worded to flow better. All in all, good start! |
DestinyDances 2/26/12 . chapter 8This is good! :) |
KatEatsLaughs 2/22/12 . chapter 1 Oh this is good, you should update this...like RIGHT NOW, I'm surprised you don't have 73838393939393 reviews...anyways keep writing. PS I am too lazy to sign in! |