Reviews for Untamed : Coven Series 3
KML92 3/27/12 . chapter 29
Well snap. The man knows what he wants. I was beginning to think he was just a stupid mindless minion. Who knew all Kalene had to do was step in front of his fire to get him to pay attention.
KML92 3/27/12 . chapter 28
Agh! That's every claustraphobics nightmare right there. That was a little bit hard to read. I imagine that's what you were asking about the other day when you asked if it would be challenging for me to read a cluastraphoic situation. I though it wouldn't be that hard. Guess I was wrong. I think I was actually holding my breath for her...
KML92 3/27/12 . chapter 27
She is so unbelievably, unberably, ridiculously, terribly stupid! What kind of schmuck goes willingly into a situaation like that? No one! She's dumb!
Writing In Ink Forever 3/26/12 . chapter 30
Wow! Amazing two chapters! I LOVE this!

And Idk. I'd right whatever POV your comfortable with. Like I said, I'd rather write on a girl POV because I am one. And I know what one talks like and thinks like.

Chris is amazing! :) Steven doesn't know what he got himself into. He should've killed Steven. Just saying.

-Elf
Ditto123 3/26/12 . chapter 30
I can't wait for the next chapter! And did Lillith make it out or is she somewhere under all that dirt?
Princess97 3/26/12 . chapter 30
Yes! Steven crossed the line. I've been waiting for that moment.
sodapop776 3/26/12 . chapter 30
Yay! Well aww... since she passed out... put yay! Christopher is FINALLY out of Stevens debt! Whoop whoop! Now they are gunna get Lilith! Wait... they better get her soon enough. Is she dies I'm blaming you!(;
Shnugglemuffin94551198 3/26/12 . chapter 30
Haha thanks. I've read all of your stories and loved them all! Ive only been on for a few months and I write too but a lot slower than u! Lol
Shnugglemuffin945511983 3/26/12 . chapter 29
Keep it girls p.o.v.! Please!
Silvia Hearten Calen 3/26/12 . chapter 28
Awesome two chapters! And thanks so much for replying to my review. :) Anyway, I gotta say, Steven has gotten way crueler and even more insane than he already was. Have to give him some points though for the whole 'bury Lil alive' scheme. Not sure if it's exactly a more efficient plan to destroy the Coven than his others, but hey, he's the bad guy. I bet this plan will go just about as well as the others.

For Caleb and Lil, it does seem like they've known each longer than they have so if you do have them say they live each other, I'd say maybe put it in a chap near the end or last chapter even. I do love this couple though and I hope Lil's boys will be OK!

Good luck with college! (Glad I don't have to worry about that yet, but in the near future) Please update soon! :D
cecily mitchell 3/26/12 . chapter 28
I didn't mean to say a piglet. Freaking autocorrect
cecily mitchell 3/26/12 . chapter 28
I'm impressed. Steven's actually mixed it up a piglet. At the same time it's a bad thing when bad guys get smarter...I hope Caleb reaches her in time
cecily mitchell 3/26/12 . chapter 27
Oh no! I can hear bad guy music in the background...
Kristincredible 3/26/12 . chapter 28
That cliffhanger, though! Killing me.
Charlee Rayne 3/25/12 . chapter 28
Steven needs to be murdered painfully.
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