NOW THIS IS HORROR.

WELL DONE.

Sick and beautiful! I was so excited when I found this!

YAY! SO HAPPY!

Oh my gosh! This is the best Cinderella story I've read! I love the twist and everything! Good work :)

Woah! That is amazing! I love it. Now let me go, before i lose my sanity from not being able to read more!

Oh my god... If my nightmares were bad now their about to get a whOle lot worse... I loved this! Can't wait for more!

My God.

Terrifying. Well done, the best horror stories are taken with things that seem friendly-like Cinderella.

Wow. I have to say, I was hooked until the end, even if there was a grimace of horror on my face.

I do want to see more. Great, a few grammatical mistakes but very good on the whole.

Update, please!

Quite excellent. A very good horror story

This is so amazing! By far my most favorite Cinderella story ever! Keep updating!

This is amazing! The best Cinderella story ever. I love it. You need to update soon!

Yay u updated! :o I am so happy and I hope her sisters and father rot :[

Keep up the good work I love the twist still

Whoa...

I never saw this fairytale classic as a twisted horror. I love this, I do wish you continue this. You seemed to do a good job at making it a horror and yet still keep the same details from the original classic. Good work, can't wait to read more. c:

Whoa...

I never saw this fairytale classic as a twisted horror. I love this, I do wish you continue this. You seemed to do a good job at making it a horror and yet still keep the same details from the original classic. Good work, can't wait to read more. c:

Interesting twist to a classic fairy tale:) brilliant and bloody:) please write more. However I do have one question. Is she still considered insane in the chapter the chapter that says ten years later or was it only the incident that happened in the prologue?

:o that's a wonderful twist! I love it more please?