Good, it conveys strong emotion. I hate weak emotions... I noticed that in this and another poem, the one third down on your list, you have put 'dagger-like words' I really do like and appreciate the anology, but I would have liked it if you had been a little more creative and had used something different. Just a thought.

Excellent! I'm stunned by this poem honestly, it's incredibly well written and very well spoken. Love it