Pretty good. The personification in this is rather entertaining, and I like the flow and word choice. Also, I noticed you enjoyed Pandemyx's story, which is what I gave him to finish. (Although he is much, much better than me) If you enjoy his work, maybe you could check out ny new story "Disturbance." Also, if you do, I'll give you some feedback for "Skate to The Sky," which is pretty interesting so far. Thanks!

Blake