|Reviews for Wicked Game|
| Jon Berkley 9/25/12 . chapter 1
Man, that's really messed up! Good job!
| Rogue Energizer Bunny 3/26/12 . chapter 1
I went back to see if there were any of your stories that I hadn't review and found this.
There should be a comma in that sentence somewhere. Meh.
Good concept, as usual from you. There needs to be more development of the backstory through details and dialogue, I think. Sometimes you get so focused on the concept and plot that the narrative lacks color and realism. I know this is one of your older things, so no judgement, but y'know. Criticism helps with anything.
| blackabyss1 3/11/12 . chapter 1
I actually found this slightly funny. Disturbing, but sometimes I like disturbing. Keep writing more like this!
| Let's See If It Moves 3/2/12 . chapter 1
Brrrrrrr...so chilling! This guy is even cra-zee-err than I am! Do you know his mobile number? I believe we have certain things in common!
Anyhoo, is this gonna continue? It would be cool if it did!