must be really akward when a situation goes like that

yay! another homework hater! high five!

okay, chapter 5? CUTE! really, its soooo cute! i love it :D i knew the kiss was gonna happen anyways, but i'm guessing it was under the misletoe right? :P

cant WAIT for your next chappy!

p.s., its really me again, it's me, apollo-the-second. thanks for the mention in your author's note :D and why didnt i log in before reviewing? internet connection was slow and i didnt want to risk it collapsing cuz i HAD to review

p.p.s. Allison: love your cookies

Nisa: please PULEEEEZ let allison be a good cook? pweese?

I like and must I say akward

Man! I really wanted a cookie! Anyways, I really like this story! I love how you always start the story about where Alli sees Luke next. It's very original and creative. I wish you could make the chapters longer so I could read more :) Update soon!

i was criticschoice2 i changed my name hehehe. thank u for replying to my REVIEW I FEeLL SO HAPPY and with that i am giving u a virtual hug! and its true your writing did really improved well.. SUBRIBing YOU

He kissed her. He frigging kissed her. Yeah, Chloe isn't gonna be her best friend for very long. I wish that'd happen to me xD. With BananaNeil :o ...or charlieissocoollike ...or Draco :D.

This is really good! I can't wait for the next part! You've left a very suspensefull cliffhanger :)

update soon

i love it! weird begining but very interesting. keep writing please! :)

Luke definitely has a thing for her. What happened to Chloe? I like the name Charlie a lot though... Teehee, sorry. Imma charlieissocoollike fangirl... And a BananaNeil fangirl who's a fangirl of Chralie. Interesting, no? I have an uncanny ability of reviewing chapters and not evening talking about the chapters...fun. I guess it's because of the "talking to the text" thing we have to do in English class. The story is the story, and disecting it will take away from it, no? Although Luke saving her was cute :D.

Heehee! Update! They should kiss!

Hmmm...interesting story. I saw it before but didn't read it because I don't like things that don't update fast (hence why I'm looking for more stories). Although you got three chapters in three days so props to you. I like this story, Although how will it play out with Luke being Allison's bff's bf? That's an interesting combo...bff's bf. I like that :D. I hope this goes on for more than just like 10 chapters though, because you do have a great start to an excellent plot.

Well. I have an account over at so I can't be bothered making one here LOL.

Moving on.

I do quite enjoy your story here. Like it's already been said, 'tis kinda short, but it's okay. Qualityquantity, aye? LOL

Anyway, your writing style is really nice, decent and easy to read. Love that part of it and the humor you put into the story.

Keep writing these smexy stories yeah?

great chapter!, but perhaps make something a little longer PLEASE

I cant wait! :) its just so nice...it's pretty okay without describing Allison (nice name!) cuz i dont really read descriptions anyway :) :) please please PLEASE upload fast, becoz if not i'm gonna..well, i'm gonna stop reading (no way i'm doing that, but still...) and this vanessa girl.. - bad bad bad vibes! -

i cant wait! (yes, again)