I would really love to see law and caramel's life after this just because they are just too cute3 and I love the little romance scenes in this chapter. I am still wondering about caramel's abuse though and if anyone in her family (besides her mother of course) knows about it.

You are an amazing writer, I always look forward to your updates :)

alianas past and life would be interesting. also i want law and caramel to be together, but im super confused about the five year wait thing and also still anxiously wondering if everyone is going to find out about the abuse caramel suffered at the hands of her mom after arven left.

something about isaac?

he is constantly mentioned as a genius or as a formidable force

but you dont mention him enough for us to properly understand why

and i think looking at the world from his eyes could interestng

he could be orchestrating a lot of these events ( or others) from behind the scenes

Curiouser and curiouser. With the smoldering jealousy of Fiona, the determination of Law, and the patient planning of Zain, life for Caramel is becoming quite complicated.

I look forward to reading more... soon... as in: why are you reading this when you should be typing? ... I'm waiting...

LAAAAAWWWW!

omgggg Lucas and Aliana! so cute.. please add more Zain! ahhh i love this

you succumb to peer pressure?

WELL THEN THE PRESSURE'S ONNNNNN!

give meeee . me want storyyyyyy!

and i'm really excited about the sequel!

but zain is starting to seem a weensy bit creepy?

i remember you saying you had problems with this chapter

I'm lucky I didn't go to bed and miss the update :D OMG WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY LAW ONLY HAVING FIVE YEARS? IF HE DIES I WILL CRY, I SWEAR! D: I liked Zain as well though, but not as much as Law :3 They're both wonderful though . . . Fiona is such a cow! I'm ashamed to say I LIKED her at first. Caramel should just fire her already, jeez. Or at least make her live somewhere far far away from her, because she's sorting giving off 'homewrecker' vibes.

idk options 1 & 2 are alright, but I think they'd mostly be better as long one-shots? I'm going to have to go with option 3 :D I haven't been reviewing because I've been away from fictionpress for a while, so I didn't get to read it right away :( and then I decided to review on the latest chapter because I'd look like a psycho if I was reviewing ten chapters straight out.

Before, I thought Caramel was a bit of a Mary Sue, but I think you've managed to turn that around and make her somehow . . . not? Which is a good thing, though sometimes I don't mind Mary-Sues, just like I don't mind cliche stories if the writing is awesome :P I'm a bit confused about the French guy, so I'm hoping that'll get cleared up, but the mystery was intentional, right?

I forgot to mention why I had wanted to see Caramel's life before her mom re-married Richard Villagold. The reason? CURIOSITY. It may sound stupid, but my curiosity is a powerful thing, so please at least consider the idea. The story focuses on CARAMEL HALL. NOT law, or arven, or whoever else is in the story. I believe that you should feed these hungry wolves of curiosity from your dear readers of just how...much...suffering, Caramel had been in the past, and just what kind of experience had made her who she is in your imagination.

Did that sound weird or kinda cool? I'm kinda a writer myself but don't have an account with fp because somethin's wrong with my laptop(stupid laptop) so ya.

A sequel! Yay! I'm not really interested in #1 or #2 so I'm thinking about something from the twins' point of view when they grow up as teenagers. That'd be a whole new story but it's still related to Caramel Hall. I think it'd be interesting!

P.S. Nice cover!

Hi, I'm back again :)

I actually agree with Zyria's review about the sequel - talk about Zain! :)

I do have an account, but i just can't log in at the moment :/

So anyways, great work on the story - one of the best I've ever read and totally engrossing!

I think that you have two options: a sequel or a spin off. Or a kinda hybrid of them...

In the sequel, I'd want to see Law and Caramel's relationship...

But I'd prefer a spin-off, where you discuss another character's life and their romance - maybe Lucas, or Isaac? :)

3! Maybe Law and caramel's life together? I would just love to hear more about caramel and Law, it'd be exciting :)