|Reviews for Haunting Memories|
| C.J. Black 7/8/12 . chapter 1
Wow Amazing. I love all of your stuff. Stunning. :) I am at a loss for words. Any of these stories- They are Bewildering- Continue any of them and I can tell you of seven publishing departments that would FLIP for your words. Particularly Four White Walls. I Insist you continue writing! :)
| BlackPantiesWithAnAngelsFace 4/13/12 . chapter 1
I can relate to this. It's a wonderful story & I'm shocked to see that you're only 15. It's a very mature story & I think you'll be an amazing writer one day! Keep it up!
| Rogue Energizer Bunny 2/28/12 . chapter 1
Oooh, very pretty! I love how he dies and hears her laughter. So creepy. I love the idea behind this story, it's very mature and the plot makes sense.
But there's a capitalization error in your summary, and the first sentence is in past tense while the rest is in present. So you open with two errors right off the bat, which sets a bad first impression there aren't many errors in the actual story. C'mon, man! Get yer head in it! *whap* LOL JK. But still, you might wanna fix those.