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  Guest 7/7/12 . chapter 35 I really liked it: I have an account on here (Sumintra Priya Valentino) but I'm just too lazy to sign in..ANYWAYS, I loved the story. My favorite part would have to be when Ashlyn found out she was gay. And of course, when Suzy worked her freaking wonder magic. Great job, love. |
 LuxVenus 7/5/12 . chapter 35Imagine -John Lennon |
| The Eternally Heartbroken 7/4/12 . chapter 35 Ah, nice to see those two have a happy ending. Good job. |
| H. Earthserpent 7/4/12 . chapter 35 i love it i love it i love it! :) Wooo! i prefer long chapters so if it take a week i'm cool with it. :) |
| Blair Phoenix 7/4/12 . chapter 35 Not going to lie, but I totally feel like One Girl's Strength was better...it deserves more reviews _ Not that this story was bad by any means, it was quite lovely and you neatly were able to wrap everything up with this final chapter. I will say, I feel that the pacing of the story felt a bit off for me, at times the story felt rushed while at other times I felt it moved a little too slow and I felt sometimes that you were trying to do too much, but besides that, I very much enjoyed this, and I look forward to your future endeavors. As to the longer/less updates or shorter/more frequent updates, I say you should just do whatever works best for you. I'm not picky either way, as long as what I'm reading is quality writing. |
| Nia Love 7/4/12 . chapter 35 Nice ending! I'm so glad that Marjory and Stacey were reunited! They seem like they were a cute couple back then. I was also glad to see that Cindy had a great support system. Not that the girls wouldn't be, but it was nice to see Suzy in action! Oh and I prefer the longer chapters and weekly releases. Longer chapters more excitement! |
| Fierce Ookami 7/4/12 . chapter 35 so totally awesome! i loved every part of this story! (except the pushing down stairs part lol) i cant wait to read your future stories if you write more! -Fierce Ookami |
| Van Quatra 7/4/12 . chapter 35 i think longer chapters are better and weekly releases it gives more time to look things over. some can do shorter good but you do better longer, chapters that i've seen so far. try another with shorter chapters and see how that goes. just a thought. |
| Van Quatra 7/1/12 . chapter 34 last chapter, so sad but thisi a good story, so god luck. |
| paint my spirit gold 7/1/12 . chapter 34 Well, I've never watched NCIS, but Abby sounded very...interesting. When she mentioned the threesome, ohmigod, Darryl's face would have been priceless! Lilly P.S. I changed my penname :) |
| Fierce Ookami 6/30/12 . chapter 34 yay Abby i like NCIS! T_T final chapter, _ ogs sequal |
| H. Earthserpent 6/30/12 . chapter 34 dang this is so great. i hope you have another story you want to post up next. :) your stories are awesome. :) |
| The Eternally Heartbroken 6/30/12 . chapter 34 Abby? NCIS? WTF? How did she get here? Anyways, nice to see some idiots get taught a lesson. Good job. |
| Nia Love 6/30/12 . chapter 34 I must say that it has been a wonderful pleasure reading Fragile Bonds! I love, love, love this story. It was more realistic compared to SOME of the other stories I've read on here. As far as this chapter, I liked it. I was glad to see into Gretchen's point of view with her friend. Nice dialogue. And the scene with the forensic scientist, I imagined her as the character before I even knew it was her! Nice chapter...can't wait for the final. I feel like this should be a tv show! Lol |
| Guest 6/28/12 . chapter 33 keep going i love it. so awesome. :) |
