|Reviews for Aware and Longing|
| Max Hadeln 2/25/12 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this piece. It was quick, and it flowed really well.
Although there are a few small errors here and there with spelling and grammar, it was well done overall.
I'm not going to point out every little mistake there was in the poem, because there weren't too many in it to begin with. But small things like "decived me" should be "deceived me". Just little things like that.
I'm going to go read your other content, and I look forward to seeing more original content from you in the future. Keep up the great work!