such vivid imagery. hope you're doing okay.

very powerful. i can feel your pain through this poem, and it just makes me want to make you less sad.

Good Lord...this is amazing, short and to the point. It really packs a punch.

Sweet Jesus, this is poignant.

sheesh.

brutally honest, and for some reason i just love it. i know, this should be constructive criticism, but i really do like this poem.

if anything, i would change the line breaks, but that's just my own opinion...it doesn't take away from the beauty of this poem.

Your poetry scares me by how accurate it is. It's blunt, and scary.