This was really good, please write more like this.

I haven't checked your page in ages, and for some unknown reason I just had the inclination to take a look. And blimey, this is brilliant. It's beautifully written, and makes me think of how it's said that people have different coloured auras, they also have different ideas of what colours their death is. Really well done my friend :)

wow that all i have to say o_o

This is gorgeous; well-written; scary. i love it. it's one of my favorite pieces by you. 33

This is beautiful. The last stanza, oh man. Beautiful.