|Reviews for Evil in the World|
| TheWriteMV16 3/4/12 . chapter 4
Great so far, I love the point of view. The only thing is sometimes the structure of the poem is a little bit awkward, but it's still pretty awesome. Excellent piece of writing overall. :)
| nightfuries 2/26/12 . chapter 2
Just as amazing as the first, if not more so! Those last three lines gave me chills!
| nightfuries 2/26/12 . chapter 1
Intense! Somewhat depressing, but you're point really hits home!