Awww...

This was beautiful and made me think of someone who lived in a 'floaty' state. I couldn't help thinking of someone who is struggling to let go of someone or something they truly cared about. This is a great poem and really took my breath away. You're a fabulous writer and should definitely keep writing.

The word "swift" seems out of context. The rest of the poem, is airy, clear, gives off a "sweet" vibe. The last five lines remind me of a helpless child that can't let go, refuse to, even.

Wow! This is so amazing! I also love the flow of the poem! :D It's really amazing!

This is beautifully done. The rhythm of the poem itself feels like the wind or a breath of air.

I'm choosing all the floaty poems today .
This one was beautiful too - even the way and style you wrote it in seemed fluffy and airy and untouchable and delicate... Too many adjectives :')
Again, another unique piece of poetry about something we take for granted but couldn't live without :3

Your poems are very different and distinguishable. I like that 'style' you've developed for yourself.

It's a little short, but it still made me think that we don't appreciate air enough. Nicely done.