That was a depressing ending but we all knew it was coming. No grammar errors. Good job. I have a suggestion for another "These Young Years" chappie. I want to see MORE Raiven, Alixia, and Ava! Oh and nice Calliope mention.

Hey there Rylee, good second chappie. There's really no spelling errors or anything so ya. Nice to see Alixia and Raiven made an appearance in this story. i was dying of laughter when Alixia said you should be proud of it and stuff.