| Reviews for Invisible |
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Doctor Why 6/28/12 . chapter 1All your poems are awesome! :D you can has talent |
xXxCookiexXx 5/10/12 . chapter 1Hey, Aiden. I joined! You should post some of your new works. Should I post one of mine? (I don't think they are really that good). This one is really good. It relates partially to me, as it did to you with pumpkin *snicker*. Well, see you tomorrow, Love you, Aiden Cookie |
Stonehartdreamer27 4/24/12 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this. We've all felt this way before; in fact, I feel the exact same way right now. Thank you so much for your review on Best Friend, and I'm glad I could make you smile. Best friends are the best things in the world, and I'm glad you have your "twin" because I know that I could never live with out "mine" :p Keep up the writing and I hope to hear more from you soon. |
Delanie 3/6/12 . chapter 1Really enjoyed the first 4 lines. I would expand on these stanzas more about the obliviousness he has towards her infatuation ;) Great poem! |
44musicfreak44 3/1/12 . chapter 1Ahhh, always gotta' love that cliche 'in love with my best friend' situation. This was very well written, wonderful job! |