There is a contradiction I think you should know about. In the first chapter you said her last name was Reddings but in the second you said it was Matthews. Just letting you know.

I hate smoking but find it alluring as well :)

I like it. please keep writing. Your great

Just read all three chapters and I'm loving it. I hope nothing goes on at that "get together." Looking forward to seeing how Patrice and Evan's...relationship begins... :)